Some of Mine

[Charmless_Anachronism]

Errr...I was...just sort of bored...So, I decided...I'll post some of my crap.
I wrote this like a week ago. It's for an anime character that died. Who's a nerd? I AM!
Too Soon

It is too soon...

That the flowers of summer may die
Embraced by winter winds.

The cherry blossoms scattered,
Turn to dust beneath the weight of time.

It is too soon...

That the toddler's open hand,
No longer fits in the mother's palm.

The beauty of the world,
Is turned to a black dispair.

It is too soon...

That the warmth of your touch,
Fades to tomorrow.

The dreams of yesterday
Are buried far beneath the sand.

It is too soon...

To lose you now.

This is about a video game. I paired these two guys up. LEAVE MY OBSESSION ALONE! It's a KH pairing. I wrote it in like...ten minutes or less.

Your Star

Let's start again with new lives...

A new star is born...
That's where I'll be waiting.

Even though you will fade much sooner than I...
I'm here.

I'll watch the Earth, like a pheonix, soar, and in a burst of flames...
die.

But I will be here.

If, even for a short while, I can hold onto your love...
I would gladly watch a thousand suns die.

If I can keep you in my heart, you may become immortal.

Watch for me...

I'll be here waiting.
In Heaven.
This is for Speech team. I considered doing Original Performance. It's this thing..yeah...Anyway, it's going to be a series of poems based on alcohal abuse, and everything. I had a couple already in the series, but we're taking it a different direction. Anyway, I'll stop going on and on now. This was my favorite I did. This probably would've been an ending poem.

Painting

The blues, and blacks, and fading yellows
If I could take them all and paint a picture.
What would I paint?

I trace the marks on my skin
Hand to arm, arm to shoulder
Connecting one to the other,
Each tells a story.

A mother, a father, a child
Together embracing.
The colors don't match, the pieces don't fit.
What would I paint?

They tell a story.
Blue; Father is trying to teach me how to ride a bike.
Black: My friend and I got into a fight.
Yellow: Connects me to the memories of another time,
Another life, a different self.

I'll take the colors, and mix them into one dull hue.
An indefinable, undividable gray.
I'll paint a world connected by the good, connected by the bad.

Each has a story: good or bad.
But together, they look the same.
The two worlds aren't so different.
Underneath, there's a family embracing
In each.

Opinions welcome.

[Tracia]

um... they're pretty, but I still wonder why are you, being so young, so damn bored and depressed.

[Charmless_Anachronism]

um... they're pretty, but I still wonder why are you, being so young, so damn bored and depressed.

EDIT: Double Sorry. I can see, after rereading my post...where you may have gotten the depressed thing. I said something like my entire life story? I just meant I was talking incessantly, and talking about Speech too much...I didn't mean the poem was about me. Sorry. I'll go edit that out. I changed it to going on and on...more literal.

Bored?...I usually don't post things because I'm just bored, but I also wanted to get an opinion from someone else. I am NOT depressed. My poems are not based on me. I just like to write. They're not supposed to be a guilt trip or anything. The last one is about how we can screw up as a family, but really they still love each other. The first one is about an anime character, and so is the second. It's supposed to be saying even though I technically died...I still love you, and I'm waiting for you.

You can interpret as you wish, but they are not a reflection of my life, or my current mental state. Most are inspired by music and media. The last one is based on an idea for an Original Performance that I had like a year ago. Though I didn't look it up, this probably one of the very few posts that I have mentioned the word boredom. It might be the first. I'll look into it.

Sorry, I don't mean to be offensive, or hypocrytical (boredom thing...probably was though), but that's not me. Interpret as you will, but don't take them as a reflection on my personality.

[Tracia]

EDIT: Double Sorry. I can see, after rereading my post...where you may have gotten the depressed thing. I said something like my entire life story? I just meant I was talking incessantly, and talking about Speech too much...I didn't mean the poem was about me. Sorry. I'll go edit that out. I changed it to going on and on...more literal.

Bored?...I usually don't post things because I'm just bored, but I also wanted to get an opinion from someone else. I am NOT depressed. My poems are not based on me. I just like to write. They're not supposed to be a guilt trip or anything. The last one is about how we can screw up as a family, but really they still love each other. The first one is about an anime character, and so is the second. It's supposed to be saying even though I technically died...I still love you, and I'm waiting for you.

You can interpret as you wish, but they are not a reflection of my life, or my current mental state. Most are inspired by music and media. The last one is based on an idea for an Original Performance that I had like a year ago. Though I didn't look it up, this probably one of the very few posts that I have mentioned the word boredom. It might be the first. I'll look into it.

Sorry, I don't mean to be offensive, or hypocrytical (boredom thing...probably was though), but that's not me. Interpret as you will, but don't take them as a reflection on my personality.

Neither I was refering specifically to you when I said: "YOU". This is exactly why I hate english. Is so ****in inpersonal! SO much that it leads to missunderstandings of this nature. And then I have to explain myself, and I HATE explaining myself. Now. Don't take it personal, cos it wasn't. Actually, I think I'm gonna refrain myself from posting anywhere else where you take part, because I belive this is not the first time we encounter each other and I prefer step aside and shut the **** up than writing all this to clear out a missunderstanding.

As i said, they're pretty.

[Charmless_Anachronism]

Neither I was refering specifically to you when I said: "YOU". This is exactly why I hate english. Is so ****in inpersonal! SO much that it leads to missunderstandings of this nature. And then I have to explain myself, and I HATE explaining myself. Now. Don't take it personal, cos it wasn't. Actually, I think I'm gonna refrain myself from posting anywhere else where you take part, because I belive this is not the first time we encounter each other and I prefer step aside and shut the **** up than writing all this to clear out a missunderstanding.

As i said, they're pretty.

Please, calm down. I did not mean to upset you. It was a misunderstanding. Everytime I am on a topic I am not going to attack because of one misunderstanding, so please don't go to such lengths. It's freedom of speech. You're entitled to speak whatever you want. I WANT YOU TO POST WHEREVER YOU WANT TO! I'm sorry if I offended you.

Sorry, if I misunderstood.

Thank you. Sorry, I didn't do that in the first place. I feel bad about that.

^__^ Be happy! Sorry, I just wanted to say something positive. Thank you so much for the feedback. And, sorry again about the misunderstanding, and please always voice your opinion. I don't want to hinder you from that.