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Hikari Hoshi
01-19-2007, 03:31 AM
the wind blows colder
a cat stretches on the porch.
winter's drawing near.

SasukeChan
01-19-2007, 11:15 PM
Nice.Here's mine:

The venomous snake.
So silent and malicious.
Vicious and crude.

GREEN_DAYforever
01-19-2007, 11:29 PM
"Darkness"

Blackened evening sky
Moon shifting across the darkness
Waiting for the sun

Hikari Hoshi
01-19-2007, 11:33 PM
nice, :D i like those. i'm not very good at haiku.

GREEN_DAYforever
01-19-2007, 11:47 PM
Thanks. :D

Hikari Hoshi
01-21-2007, 05:07 PM
An angel looks down.
looking at a wounded world
a tear is shed.

SasukeChan
01-27-2007, 01:09 AM
Hey,that's really good!Better than mine...

Hikari Hoshi
01-31-2007, 03:44 AM
says who? i suck at haiku. but i write them anyway.

I sit all alone.
serching for what is not there
where have my friends gone?