View Full Version : Wrong.{{not my best work.XD}}
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:15 PM
{ooooook this might not my best work...<.< XD lol}
Wrong
i thought you loved me
i was wrong
now i feel broken
like a sad song
of all the time we spend together i thought you felt it
but i was dead wrong
you said it to me "i love you", i know you did
i heard these words, they stayed in my head
but then you saw her, i loved her more
now i feel sore and torn
i can't even look at you now a days
all i do is feel the sun's rays
this is the end,the end is now
good-bye to you,good-bye now.
wiccagwen
01-22-2007, 11:16 PM
{ooooook this might not my best work...<.< XD lol}
Wrong
i thought you loved me
i was wrong
now i feel broken
like a sad song
of all the time we spend together i thought you felt it
but i was dead wrong
you said it to me "i love you", i know you did
i heard these words, they stayed in my head
but then you saw her, i loved her more
now i feel sore and torn
i can't even look at you now a days
all i do is feel the sun's rays
this is the end,the end is now
good-bye to you,good-bye now.
it's good!!
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:17 PM
it's good!!
really....?<.<
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:18 PM
htats better then this
Its not whats I want
Its what I need
It is you
It is what keeps me sain
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:19 PM
htats better then this
Its not whats I want
Its what I need
It is you
It is what keeps me sain
lol
i like that one
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:20 PM
I madeit up in like ten sec at school XD
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:20 PM
I madeit up in like ten sec at school XD
nice.XD....
wiccagwen
01-22-2007, 11:20 PM
really....?<.<
juppers!! but i have to go now
byebye
(K)
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:21 PM
juppers!! but i have to go now
byebye
(K)
bye bye bye bye!
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:38 PM
nice.XD....
I uasally do that if i feel emotional
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:39 PM
I uasally do that if i feel emotional
same here i make new poems when i feel sad mostly.
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:44 PM
I do it when ever ... i have lots like
You left me crying in the rain
With nothing left but shame
You left me lying in the rain
With nothing left but a name
Yoiu left me dieing in the rain
With n othing left but pain
Me and my friend made that up.
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:50 PM
I do it when ever ... i have lots like
You left me crying in the rain
With nothing left but shame
You left me lying in the rain
With nothing left but a name
Yoiu left me dieing in the rain
With n othing left but pain
Me and my friend made that up.
i like that,i make poems when i'm sad.like this 1
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something that`s not right
i cry these tears from my eyes and they fall from heaven`s sky
i hate this feeling it`s not love but something bad
it`s not something you must not call ''rad'' nor ''fad.''
my heart hurts in my chest
and all the rest.
i`m alone with this fear
along with these falling tears
pain is something i can not fight
pain is something no one can fight
hear my words hear them now
before i drowned in my tears as the dawn goes out.
someone help now
someone help now
before i have to see another sad frown.
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:51 PM
*claps* thats realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly good
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:53 PM
*claps* thats realllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly good
thanks!i was feeling sad that day...
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:55 PM
_-_ i can tell
kiki26:)
01-22-2007, 11:57 PM
_-_ i can tell
yeperness.
hissing
01-22-2007, 11:58 PM
:P any way i have to go! beybye ja na (see ya)
kiki26:)
01-23-2007, 12:13 AM
:P any way i have to go! beybye ja na (see ya)
later.......