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mj_in_wonderlandXO
01-25-2007, 02:38 AM
"I Loved You"

I hate my body, I thought to myself, checking out my body shape in the mirror. It was ugly and fat. Not like how other put it, like a size 2 dress. I was fat, I hated my body, my life, and myself.

I had two friends. The best brother ever, Vince. He was so calm, and understanding, and he knew everything about me. Then, there is my best and only real friend, Matt Good. He was just amazing. He always knew how to make me happy, and he was my only friend, and I was his only friend. Everybody called us boyfriend and girlfriend. We always blushed madly whenever someone mocked our friendship. It was dumb, but whatever.

I tired to push all the fat down to see what it looked like. I grimaced as an idea popped into my head....no, I just couldn't, but I did. I made my way into my bathroom and got to my knees infront of the toilet. Leaning downward, I pulled my hair out of my face. My free hand rose up and I gawked at it for a moment. Was this a good idea?...It was the only way I thought would help me.

I took my hand, fingers first, and dodged them into my mouth. Fingers sliding down my throat as the bitter taste of my salty skin burned the back of my tongue. My eyes watered from the sting, and I gagged as I pushed my hands further back into my throat. I soon heard myself choking up....it was it. I leaned my head further towards the toilet and pulled my hand out of my throat, I threw up rapidly. My eyes watered as the impact effected me. It felt so new and lighter to me. After I was done, I stood myself up and washed up. I looked the same as I did before. Same clothes, make-up, same body........Nothing was changing as I raced back into the bathroom and forced my hands down my throat yet again and again, but nothing was working. I did it for a long period of time. After I cleaned up again, I gave up. THis stupid body would never change....it wasn't changing at all. All my emotions overpowered me.

I leaned myself against my bathroom wall and searched for my shaving razor, as I did I slowly slid out the blades. The glisten of the blades gave me shivers. I put it to my skin as tears fell down my eyeliner stained cheeks. Shuddering didn't help as I dragged the razors along my arm helplessly. All the pain felt so good to let out, nothing was helping me..nothing. Why wasn't anything working? I 've tried pills, diets, everything.......nothing could help me right now except for myself. I kept lacerating my skin in all directions. I couldn't stop. You would think the pain was unimaginable, but no. I honestly couldn't feel a thing. Pretty soon, I felt myself fall over onto the tile. The bathroom door was locked, I was alone all silent and watching my life fade out. Nobody was coming to my rescue. Nobody loved me, nobody will once i'm gone.....no one will miss me. I'm all alone. The last thing I knew before it all went dark was my scarlet blood dripping from my arms and legs and a voice screaming my name.....,"LIVIA!" Who was that voice?....Oh well, it all didn't matter anymore.

Oh no, I woke up. ****, I thought to myself, another failed attempt......

I looked around the white room I layed in. I was so weak and tired. I managed to turn my head to the side where my arm lay on an angle. Cut marks everywhere, but the only thing I could make out were words. Words carved into my arm. The words....Nobody loved me.

"Ah...."I whispered as I looked around again. It was all so bright. Who was that voice talking in the backround? It-It was the same voice from last night..I knew that voice, and I remebered what happemd last night.

10 hours ago....

I felt someone lift my body into their strong arms and hold me in a tight grip. I felt the tears of the stranger swim down his cheeks onto my face. The voice.....The voice it whispered....I couldn't remember...ugh, I just couldn't ****ing remember.

*Back to reality*

I heard footsteps make their way to my bedside. I looked up into amazing blue eyes. Black hair hung in his pale face, and eyeliner ran down those flustered cheeks. My eyes were barely open, I don't think he knew I was awake. It was him...it was Matt.
He was crying....for me?

His hand came over my cheek as he stroked it with his warm tough hands. All the feeling of his face seemed tough and stubborn, but looking into Matt's eyes gave the impression of sadness and fear as they glistened. He sniffed, I knew he was trying to be strong and emotionless, but the tears comletely gave it away.

His eyes made their way over to my arm that had the words carved in them. His expression just got softer and sadder in those eyes that twinkled.

He sighed coldly,"Livs....Don't take yourself away from me...I can't lose you, please don't die, Livia..."

I would respond if I could, but I couldn't. The pains from bloodloss were overpowering. His facial expression grew angry and hurt. "Olivia!,"he cried,"Please....I'm begging you...come back to me again, I'll make it all better, I promise!" He wailed as he put his hand over his mouth to try and stop himself from crying. He knew I was dying, and I knew it too. "Livs...,"he whispered,"Remember when we were kids and I said wherever you go, I go?"

There was an awkward pause as he cried,"Well, that promise I will not break...you go...I go. I always keep my word." Then to notice again that I couldnt answer him his gaze went to the words on my arm again. He paused and came closer to me as he leaned over my still body. He softly pressed his lips to mine."I loved you." he murmered as I felt it all fade out. All I heard was my life support go for a long pause and Matt whisper,"I love you,Livs,I'll see you in a little while..."

mj_in_wonderlandXO
01-29-2007, 11:50 PM
wow..no replies???you people are MEAN!:(

Hikari Hoshi
01-29-2007, 11:57 PM
wow..... wow....

mj_in_wonderlandXO
01-31-2007, 09:40 PM
whats the wow for, i kno its emoer than heck, but still is it a good wow or a bad? I mean, afterall I did just come up with it off the top of my head...= /

kiki26:)
02-03-2007, 11:48 PM
this story's sad *sobs* yet.. i like it.

Hikari Hoshi
02-03-2007, 11:50 PM
that was a good 'wow'

hissing
02-04-2007, 12:02 AM
*wipes tear* i actually cried that touched me, plus i had My Immortal on... which reminds me of this story

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:20 AM
wow:eek: , thank you guys, mann, was it really that good? All I did was come up with it randomly. not like its a bad thing but yeah. Tell me, how does my immortal[[by evanascence[sp?]] i think]] remind you of this?

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:21 AM
that was a good 'wow'
..well:confused: ...wow ^.^

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 01:25 AM
i wish i could write good stuff like that randomly. i could really use that talet for my writing class.

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:27 AM
wow:eek: , thank you guys, mann, was it really that good? All I did was come up with it randomly. not like its a bad thing but yeah. Tell me, how does my immortal[[by evanascence[sp?]] i think]] remind you of this?
i know how that is with geting random storys from the back of ur head.lol
happens to me a lot

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:30 AM
i mean, I just started writing. I had no idea it would turn out that way. I mean, when I'm told to sit down and write brainstorms. I can't, its hard. So, I write and then just come up with something. But i guess you all think that this storyi s amazing:confused: , I mean I like it, my friends like it, I even have a banner for it, but mann, i never thought people would even like this story at all cuz its all emo.:(

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:33 AM
http://http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/xXbloody_smirksXx/lovedyou.jpg

hissing
02-04-2007, 01:34 AM
wow:eek: , thank you guys, mann, was it really that good? All I did was come up with it randomly. not like its a bad thing but yeah. Tell me, how does my immortal[[by evanascence[sp?]] i think]] remind you of this?

im not sure....it just does, wait a sec im going to listen to it again

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:35 AM
i mean, I just started writing. I had no idea it would turn out that way. I mean, when I'm told to sit down and write brainstorms. I can't, its hard. So, I write and then just come up with something. But i guess you all think that this storyi s amazing:confused: , I mean I like it, my friends like it, I even have a banner for it, but mann, i never thought people would even like this story at all cuz its all emo.:(
i still like it!maybe u should make a part 2 or something.:O

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 01:37 AM
yeah, a lot of stories are spiratic. like the one i'm writing now. it's 93 pages so far and it started with me talking in the shower.

({yes i talk to myself in the shower.})

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:39 AM
yeah, a lot of stories are spiratic. like the one i'm writing now. it's 93 pages so far and it started with me talking in the shower.

({yes i talk to myself in the shower.})
i talk to myself a lot,like i talk to my computer and other things.:O

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:41 AM
i talk to myself in the shower all the time, and i sing, and i think about stories a lot too, and im writing a damb story that im getting bored with but i might as well finish it i mean its 164 pages long. Then, im gunna write sumthing else.

I dont know, im just really good at writing stories having to do with death.

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:41 AM
i still like it!maybe u should make a part 2 or something.:O
:confused: how? they're dead:confused:

hissing
02-04-2007, 01:45 AM
make them not die XD

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 01:45 AM
well, my story is starting to lose momentum. i mean the story itself is still good, but i'm starting to get bord with it... i have to write short stuff for my writing class though.

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:46 AM
but at the end it said livia died, and matt would see her in a little while:confused:

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:47 AM
well, my story is starting to lose momentum. i mean the story itself is still good, but i'm starting to get bord with it... i have to write short stuff for my writing class though.
yeah me too, i juss got done writing for a project. its a fable and im just suprised i could do that. when we write stories it has a word limit and i ALWAYS go over the limit

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:51 AM
:confused: how? they're dead:confused:
i don't know,maybe they see each other in heaven?

hissing
02-04-2007, 01:52 AM
...or hell

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:53 AM
...or hell
._., .............

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 01:53 AM
i'm not sure if we have a limit... our first assignment is to introduce two characters and a setting in three pages or more. i'm not sure what i'm gonna write about though cuz i write mostly guerra and this is fiction or something like that....

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 01:54 AM
you won't see anyone in hell. i'm not sure about heaven... but they didn't sound like christians to me.

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:57 AM
._., .............
well, ive heard that you go to hell for attempting and commiting suicide. because it's telling god that you dont want want he gave you. So, i think its in hell

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 01:58 AM
you won't see anyone in hell. i'm not sure about heaven... but they didn't sound like christians to me.
oh u mean my characters?:confused:

kiki26:)
02-04-2007, 01:59 AM
well, ive heard that you go to hell for attempting and commiting suicide. because it's telling god that you dont want want he gave you. So, i think its in hell
hm...*shrugs*it was an idea.but hey u guys hated it and it's not my story.^.^*walks out*

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:01 AM
well, ive heard that you go to hell for attempting and commiting suicide. because it's telling god that you dont want want he gave you. So, i think its in hell

as a christan i can say that wrong....

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 02:03 AM
well yeah, but it's hard to tell from such a short clip. but i guess anyone can kill themselves. Christians are just less likely to. anyway, you don't atomaticly go to hell for committing suicide. i don't think so anyway. i'm not sure what the bible says on that but people are forgiven for murder so i don't see why God wouldn't forgive them for that.

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:05 AM
well yeah, but it's hard to tell from such a short clip. but i guess anyone can kill themselves. Christians are just less likely to. anyway, you don't atomaticly go to hell for committing suicide. i don't think so anyway. i'm not sure what the bible says on that but people are forgiven for murder so i don't see why God wouldn't forgive them for that.

Note what i said before he said this...or she

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 02:07 AM
thank you. it's nice to know i'm not alone in my faith.

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:12 AM
lol...no ones alone XD people just think they are...wow that kindda sounds like the story

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 02:13 AM
i beleive in God, but not the bible. but i'm not sure, it's just something I heard...like hating ur life is a sin or something?:confused:

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:14 AM
well there are some things that im very against in the bible such as being gay or lez or bi is wrong

mj_in_wonderlandXO
02-04-2007, 02:16 AM
lol...no ones alone XD people just think they are...wow that kindda sounds like the story
yes but you dont know the backround story of it...hmmm, maybe i should write a backround story :confused:

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 02:17 AM
lol i know.

well, haterid is a sin, it's merder in your heart. but God forgives sin. that's why He sent Jesus to die for us, He loves us. but how can you believe in God and not His word?

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:17 AM
yes but you dont know the backround story of it...hmmm, maybe i should write a backround story :confused:

thats would be a good idea

Hikari Hoshi
02-04-2007, 02:18 AM
well there are some things that im very against in the bible such as being gay or lez or bi is wrong
i'm sorry, but i must say, how can you honestly say you believe if you don't believe all of it?

hissing
02-04-2007, 02:18 AM
lol i know.

well, haterid is a sin, it's merder in your heart. but God forgives sin. that's why He sent Jesus to die for us, He loves us. but how can you believe in God and not His word?

You can belive in a higher being...