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eclipiseAngel
01-28-2007, 08:26 AM
Across the dusty deserts and dried plains of inner Mexico, in the far off reaches of the siesta sun there was a tragedy. After finding a mysterious ticket to an all expense paid trip to Mexico many people were bused to an old Mexican town in the middle of the El'dor Desert.

Those who went on the trip became broken down in the middle of the small town of Pueblo, a dusty and creepy little town made of dried mud and old sacred traditions. The time of the day in which they found themselves there happened to be the siesta when all are resting, but the people didn't just rest. They all seemed to be turned to stone.

It is said that the tourists found an old Hotel, Hotel Diablo Grande. They stayed there hoping to call out into the world but found trouble along the way. After a few days it seemed that strange things happened. Flying objects, missing people, and the power suddenly going out.It was never clear why though.

Some of the inhabitants said things about demons of the night, and vampires. It was said such beings had a dream world where they’d take their victims and have their way. Though it is unsure that these ideals and such are true. They said the massive Diablo Grande Hotel is the source of these evil spirits but no proof has been found.

There was only one survivor; she was young at the time. It is said that when she was found she couldn't speak, blood covered her being. She was institutionalized for seven years.

Nine years after the actual event, she decided to go back to that place to face what she saw, but it seemed that another group of unknowing people received the mysterious tickets. She will try her best at keeping the group safe and out of harms way. Some will live and some will die.

The question is what exactly happened at the Diablo Grande? And the small town of Pueblo, what's up with the stories? Well it's a mystery worth solving.

A/N: okay there you now have a plot.....

next up is the chapter...so if you want this to keep going review the plot tell me if good or not?