View Full Version : "Don't Try To Fix Me I'm Not Broken..."
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:22 AM
"Don't try to fix me I'm not broken..." ~ Evanescence
THE STORY
It is six hundred years into the future in America. Recently there had been a fighting over laws that is tearing the country apart. Due to this rebellion the president has sent out military forces to "fix" everyone on the other side. The one catch? The other side is all children from ages three to seventeen! AND they are all orphans! How will a group of kids over come an army you ask? Well, you'll see!
Template...
Name:
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):
Gender:
Weapon:
Race:
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Apperance:
MINE:
Name: Emily
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 11
Gender: Female
Weapon: bow and Arrow
Race: Neko
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): Rebellion
Bio: She is an orphan and travels with her brother. She loves to rebel against the unfair laws the country has set.
Personality: Sweet, shy, funny, easily annoyed.
Likes: Sweet things, drawing, animals, writing, reading, archery, her brother, the ocean, music.
Dislikes: When her brother gets over-protective
Apperance:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j182/cherryboombabe/anime/954fa91299d4214af1f480810c65wk.jpg
Name: Dustin
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 12
Gender: Male
Weapon: Katanna and his claws.
Race: Neko
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): Rebellion
Bio: Emily is his sister and his only family. He is very quiet to people he doesn't know and is very protective of his sister.
Personality: Quiet, solitary, sweet, agressive, competitive.
Likes: Ramen, his sister, cats, trees, outside, music, snow.
Dislikes: Dogs, jerks, people who make fun of his sister.
Apperance:http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c390/kagura_chan101/Nekoboy2.jpg
imprincess_tiger
02-07-2007, 05:27 AM
Name: Sonador
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 14
Gender: female
Weapon: sword of light and sword of darkness
Race: neko
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): Rebilion
Bio: ???
Likes: ???
Dislikes: ???
Apperance: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v302/shawnjon5000/Anime/1052007819_say_catboi.jpg
darkerthanlife
02-07-2007, 05:30 AM
Name:nuw
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):16
Gender:femail
Weapon:bow and sward
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):rebelion
Bio:??
Likes:alot
Dislikes:verry little
Apperance:avatire
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:31 AM
Name: Sonador
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 14
Gender: female
Weapon: sword of light and sword of darkness
Race: neko
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): Rebilion
Bio: ???
Likes: ???
Dislikes: ???
Apperance: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v302/shawnjon5000/Anime/1052007819_say_catboi.jpg
((Thank you for joining))
imprincess_tiger
02-07-2007, 05:32 AM
(no problem) (me bored)
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:33 AM
(no problem) (me bored)
((Same here))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 05:37 AM
Name:Angel
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):16
Gender:fem.
Weapon:
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m272/Meekay_2006/oooooooooshiny.jpg
(turns into this:http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h147/ange_mystique/My%202006%20Wishlist/Jewelry/10kt-1.jpg when not in use)
Race:sorceress
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): unknown
Bio:she doesn't like taking sides because she's afraid she'll have to do something against her will. When something like that happens, she'll just high tell it out of where ever she is. She's hangin with the orphans though cause she herself is an orphan.
Likes:alot
Dislikes:a little
Apperance:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v614/AnimeAngel93/sketchgirl.jpg
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:39 AM
Name:Angel
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):16
Gender:fem.
Weapon:
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m272/Meekay_2006/oooooooooshiny.jpg
(turns into this:http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h147/ange_mystique/My%202006%20Wishlist/Jewelry/10kt-1.jpg when not in use)http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c245/KellyKatherine/thpinkheartdiamond.jpg
Race:sorceress
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): unknown
Bio:she doesn't like taking sides because she's afraid she'll have to do something against her will. When something like that happens, she'll just high tell it out of where ever she is. She's hangin with the orphans though cause she herself is an orphan.
Likes:alot
Dislikes:a little
Apperance:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v614/AnimeAngel93/sketchgirl.jpg
((^^ Thanks for joining! But, I can't see your pic of the girl...I can see the weapons though...))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 05:45 AM
((^^ Thanks for joining! But, I can't see your pic of the girl...I can see the weapons though...))
((she looks like: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v614/AnimeAngel93/sketchgirl.jpg also the pink diamond was an accident))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:46 AM
((she looks like: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v614/AnimeAngel93/sketchgirl.jpg also the pink diamond was an accident))
((I still can't see it...))
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-07-2007, 05:49 AM
Name:Jade
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):16
Gender:female
Weapon:non she is a healer
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio:look at Zade's
Likes: n/a
Dislikes: n/a
Apperance:http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c69/Naomi90210/Anime/114.jpg
Name:Zade
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 16
Gender:male
Weapon:dagger and a gun
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio:Jade is his twin sister and Leon is his older brother. same family history has Leon but he believes along with his sister that the Govement is at fault for there parents deaths so they decided to join the rebellion instead.
Likes:n/a
Dislikes:n/a
Apperance:http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i215/snowdrift_2/Male%20Anime/anime_fire_vile.png
Name: Leon
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 21
Gender:male
Weapon:look in pic.
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): military forces
Bio: His younger siblings are Zade and Jade. They grew up with a happy life until there house was bomb during the fighting. Leon believes that the Rebellion was the cause of the fighting because if they hadn't acted against the government then there would have been no war there for his parents would still be alive.
Likes:n/a
Dislikes:n/a
Apperance:http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f51/rhyspix/Anime%20Males/28ef46c5.jpg
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:51 AM
Name:Jade
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17):16
Gender:female
Weapon:non she is a healer
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio:look at Zade's
Likes: n/a
Dislikes: n/a
Apperance:http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c69/Naomi90210/Anime/114.jpg
Name:Zade
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 16
Gender:male
Weapon:dagger and a gun
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio:Jade is his twin sister and Leon is his older brother. same family history has Leon but he believes along with his sister that the Govement is at fault for there parents deaths so they decided to join the rebellion instead.
Likes:n/a
Dislikes:n/a
Apperance:http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i215/snowdrift_2/Male%20Anime/anime_fire_vile.png
Name: Leon
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 21
Gender:male
Weapon:look in pic.
Race:human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.): military forces
Bio: His younger siblings are Zade and Jade. They grew up with a happy life until there house was bomb during the fighting. Leon believes that the Rebellion was the cause of the fighting because if they hadn't acted against the government then there would have been no war there for his parents would still be alive.
Likes:n/a
Dislikes:n/a
Apperance:http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f51/rhyspix/Anime%20Males/28ef46c5.jpg
((Thanks for joining! ^^))
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-07-2007, 05:53 AM
((no problem but i might have to get off here soon.))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 05:55 AM
((I still can't see it...))
((that's weird cause I can see it..............uh...........gimme a minute))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:56 AM
((that's weird cause I can see it..............uh...........gimme a minute))
((Okay...0_o you don't have a dot next to your name...))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 05:57 AM
((This work?: http://images.quizilla.com/U/UN/UNW/UnwantedHope/1170827607_sketchgirl2.JPG))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 05:58 AM
((Okay...0_o you don't have a dot next to your name...))
((did you just now notice that??????????????????????????????))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:58 AM
((This work?: http://images.quizilla.com/U/UN/UNW/UnwantedHope/1170827607_ketchgirl2.JPG))
((>< It says: "Image not available. (Boy that sucks)"))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 05:59 AM
((did you just now notice that??????????????????????????????))
((Yes, yes I did.))
NinjaMouse
02-07-2007, 06:03 AM
Name: Alex
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 17
Gender: Female
Weapon: Katana and gernades
Race: Human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio: Alex parents were killed in the military so she turned on the military to fight what she beleives is right
Likes: Explosives
Dislikes: Military
Apperance:http://images.quizilla.com/E/elricescence/1123013905_sfrickenme.jpg Except with black hair and blue eyes
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 06:04 AM
((>< It says: "Image not available. (Boy that sucks)"))
((see this:http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e183/Lira_Sharkova/normal_black_cat.jpg))
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-07-2007, 06:10 AM
((i can see it!))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 06:13 AM
((i can see it!))
((yea that's how she looks! that's not the picture I posted but it'll do. the one I posted was a full-body pic))
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-07-2007, 06:14 AM
((o ok will i have seen her pic. before so i now what you are talking about.))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 06:15 AM
Name: Alex
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 17
Gender: Female
Weapon: Katana and gernades
Race: Human
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):
Bio: Alex parents were killed in the military so she turned on the military to fight what she beleives is right
Likes: Explosives
Dislikes: Military
Apperance:http://images.quizilla.com/E/elricescence/1123013905_sfrickenme.jpg Except with black hair and blue eyes
Thanks........
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 06:16 AM
((see this:http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e183/Lira_Sharkova/normal_black_cat.jpg))
((NOW I see it! ^^))
Pink Angel
02-07-2007, 06:16 AM
((well i gots to gos peace sexy ducks:D))
NinjaMouse
02-07-2007, 06:16 AM
(( no problem I'm bored and this looks fun))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 08:22 PM
((Anyone here? 'Cuz we can start now...))
Distant Soul
02-07-2007, 08:51 PM
(give me a minute to rumage up a form! ^_^)
SugarWolf279
02-07-2007, 09:06 PM
Name:Ivy
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 6
Gender: Female
Weapon: Skilled at swordmanship.
Race: Human?
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):Rebellion
Bio: Unknown,found in a sewer.
Likes: Kittens,swords,Reading,writing stories.
Dislikes: Vampires and Ghosts
Apperance:I Did NOT draw this picture.Just for reference.
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q20/Unicorn94/Littlegirlbighammer.png
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 09:29 PM
Name:Ivy
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 6
Gender: Female
Weapon: Skilled at swordmanship.
Race: Human?
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):Rebellion
Bio: Unknown,found in a sewer.
Likes: Kittens,swords,Reading,writing stories.
Dislikes: Vampires and Ghosts
Apperance:I Did NOT draw this picture.Just for reference.
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q20/Unicorn94/Littlegirlbighammer.png
((Thank you for joining! ^_^))
SugarWolf279
02-07-2007, 09:30 PM
(9well,when du we start?))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-07-2007, 09:56 PM
(9well,when du we start?))
((We can start now I suppose...))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-08-2007, 02:06 AM
((Anyone here? I wanna start! ><))
NinjaMouse
02-08-2007, 02:21 AM
((I'm here and I wanna start too))
Gothanimedollfreak
02-08-2007, 02:32 AM
((Okay, here we go! ^^))
Dustin sat on the ground, bored out of his mind. Emily sighed she was listening to "Cute Without The E (Cut From The Team)" by "Taking Back Sunday" on her iPod. ((http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JduO4OGZKY8))
NinjaMouse
02-08-2007, 02:52 AM
ALex was woring with some explosives cahnges the chages and setting them to her own decnator.
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-08-2007, 02:57 AM
((hey guys!))
Jade was patching up a cut on Zades arm from a recent battle. "You really need to be more careful." She told him. Zade just rolled his eyes and winced a little when she started to stitch the cut close.
~~~~
Leon was at the firing rang practicing his shooting/
NinjaMouse
02-08-2007, 03:01 AM
after finishing the changes and putting them up ALex laid on down she looked up at the sky, thinking
GunsXxgoXxBangXxBang
02-08-2007, 03:04 AM
"There ya go all done." Jade said while tieing the string off. "Just remember not to do anything that would cause the stitches to pop." She told him. "Alright i wont." Zade said before heading out the door and outside
NinjaMouse
02-08-2007, 03:08 AM
ALex closed her eyes she felt like sleeping because she had been up all night working with different explsoives and weapons, but she was afraid. Afraid that an attack might happen and she woulnt' be able to fight.
Pink Angel
02-08-2007, 03:12 AM
Angel rested her elbow on a flat yet big rock, almost shaped like a square, and she rested her head on her hand as she stared out at the stream before her
Gothanimedollfreak
02-08-2007, 04:07 AM
"Stupid military..." Dustin mumbled. Emily hit him over the head. "OW, EMILY!" Dustin yelled. "Your an idiot." She muttered. "WHY AM I AN IDIOT!? THEY KILLED MO-" Emily glared at Dustin. Their parents death was harder on her. She witnessed their slaughter while Dustin was trying to find his braclet.
NinjaMouse
02-08-2007, 04:19 AM
ALex couldn't fight the urge of sleeping off anymore, she drifted off to sleep, her hand was on her katana and her jacket full of explosives was beside her head.
SugarWolf279
02-09-2007, 05:58 PM
Ivy ran around hitting everthing in her way with her hammer and giggles.
NinjaMouse
02-09-2007, 06:15 PM
Even when sleeping Alex was plagued by thoughts, thoughts that made sleeping more of a pain.
Gothanimedollfreak
02-09-2007, 09:05 PM
Emily sighed. "I wanna go..." She whined.
"Not yet!" Dustin scolded.
"RAWR!" Emily yelled. and closed her eyes.
Stand in the rain
02-10-2007, 04:15 AM
((do you mind if I join?))
Name:Savea (Sav-e-ah)
Age:17
Gender:Female
Race:Human
Side:Military
Bio:She sighned up for the military mainly to please her parents since they were both in the service.And also so she could help people and protect her country even if she dosent understand why or who therye fighting against.
Personality:Quiet but ccn be feirce if you get in her way.Confued and determened.
Likes:Music taking walks,water (like swimming n' stuff) and lots of other stuff.
Dislikes:Bugs,people who harm innocent people,and people with large ego's.
Looks:
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e244/forever_in_fantasi/ANIME/MoonGoddess.jpg
Weapon:Spear and sheild and then she has a small sword.
Solarkitten
02-10-2007, 04:44 AM
Name: kloud
Age (If on rebellion: 3-17): 15
Gender: female
Weapon: two swords
Race:1/2 neko 1/2 summoner
Side (Rebelion, Military forces, Unknown, etc.):rebelion
Bio:she doesn't remember much except that her parents where killed by an assassin
Likes:???
Dislikes:???
Apperance:the day her parents died:http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h192/SolarKitten_2006/th1147634200_poke-02.jpg 10 years later:http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h192/SolarKitten_2006/th43175892.jpg
Stand in the rain
02-10-2007, 04:56 AM
Savea sat in the breifing room quietly ignoring the general's instructions.When she heard her name being called she perked up real quick.
"Savea are you paying attention?" said the general
"Um yeah sure do your best,dont hold back,got it got it."
"Good so you know that you are in group 5 right?"
"Um yeah I know."
"And group 5 is the first going out into battle so hurry and get ready to leave."
SugarWolf279
02-10-2007, 12:56 PM
Ivy sat down panting.
Stand in the rain
02-10-2007, 06:03 PM
Her team all got on a large helacopter and flew towards the battle site.
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 12:18 AM
kloud was hiding behind a run down building ready for anything
Gothanimedollfreak
02-11-2007, 12:54 AM
Dustin sniffed the air and growled grabbing his katanna. "Huh? What's wrong, Dustin?" Emily asked. "Military dogs..." Dustin growled. Emily sighed. Her brother was so violent sometimes! She personally hated the war but only took sides for the sake off her brother...
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 01:00 AM
kloud counted in her head then ran for it and she turned a corner to fast and ran into a guy so she did a back flip and held her dagger up (Dustin)
Gothanimedollfreak
02-11-2007, 01:23 AM
"EMILY, GET BEHIND ME!" Dustin yelled. Emily nodded and ran behind him. Dustin unsheathed his katanna and gripped it.
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 01:30 AM
kloud looked at them both "oh never mind I thought you were the military"
Gothanimedollfreak
02-11-2007, 01:36 AM
Dustin looked at the girl "Yea..me too. Sorry" He mumbled. Emily anime sweatdroped. "All that for nothing? Ugh..." She thought. She walked from behind Dustin, smiling at the girl. "Sorry about that! My name is Emily and this is my elder brother, Dustin. He's kinda...over-protective..." Emily said. "Excuse me for trting to save your life" Dustin mumbled.
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 01:40 AM
kloud laughed "well that's what family is for..name's kloud" she hoped her eyes didn't show she was sad when she said family
Gothanimedollfreak
02-11-2007, 01:42 AM
kloud laughed "well that's what family is for..name's kloud" she hoped her eyes didn't show she was sad when she said family
"We're not much of a family...it's just the two of us." Emily said softly.
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 01:46 AM
"yeah maybe but you've still got each other don't let anything happen to each other" she was trying not to sound sad
Gothanimedollfreak
02-11-2007, 01:55 AM
"Right!" Emily said. She nodded.
Solarkitten
02-11-2007, 02:04 AM
"well since we've already met I geuss I should stay with you for protection incase your brother cna't protect you"
Stand in the rain
02-11-2007, 02:12 AM
The helicopter landed and Savea's team got out.She looked over the landscape,it was pretty much a wasteland.There were the ramains of what used to be a town."Probobly a hideout for the rebellion." she thought. And she remebered looking down on it from the helicopter seeing a velley and some woods beyond it.
"Okay team 5 move out!" yelled the teams leader.
Stand in the rain
02-13-2007, 03:12 AM
(( anyone here?))
Solarkitten
02-18-2007, 04:38 AM
kloud paused for a sec then she remembered she had to get something so she smiled "sorry I almost forgot I have to be somewhere...bye!" she ran off really fast and after a few minutes of running she ran into Savea and pulled out her daggers
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 12:53 AM
Savea wasent really paying attention to where she was going and ran into a girl with white hair.The girl pulled out a weapon and Savea instantly pulled out her sheild and spear ready to fight.
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 12:59 AM
kloud didn't care who this girl was she wasn't a rebel or anyone from this place so she didn't trust her "what are you doing here?"
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:09 AM
"My name is Savea and I am a soldier in the Military here to stop the rebellion. Put down your weapon and no one will get hurt."
Gothanimedollfreak
02-20-2007, 01:11 AM
((What's I miss?))
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 01:15 AM
"a solder from the military eh? well we don't need you or anyone else!!" (not much my character ran into one of the people from the military....oh and you can offer to let her join the military if you want)
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:16 AM
((Kloud and Savea met and i think were about to duke it out.))
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:17 AM
"Put down your weapon." she said again read for anything
Gothanimedollfreak
02-20-2007, 01:17 AM
((Kloud and Savea met and i think were about to duke it out.))
((Oh okay thanks))
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 01:20 AM
"no I don't trust no one! and I don't believe you or anyone else who is in the military I hate the military they killed my family!!" her eyes started to sting with tears
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:30 AM
When Savea saw the tears in the girls eye's she was starteld but stood her ground "If you dont put down your weapons then I will be forced to attack."
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 01:35 AM
"does it look like I care weither you attack me or not! if I die then I won't be alone anymore....." she starts to lower er weapons as she thinks about the thought of always being alone (your character can offer to let her join the military and say she won't be alone if she joins...just a friendly suggestion)
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:48 AM
(( yeah i was thining the same thiing.))
"I'm sorry that you feel that way.But theres nothing I can do if you want you can join the military and help us make a better country."
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 01:52 AM
(wow to minds think alike)
kloud stares at her swords "wyh should I be in the military when they're the ones who wrecked my life?"
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 01:55 AM
"Tell me how many peoople on the militar have you killed? People with families and friends.Just because we fight dosent mean we dont have hearts and souls."
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 02:01 AM
"I-I-I can't kill" she twists her swords around embarassed
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 02:11 AM
"Fine if your not going to join then.." Savea grabbed the girls wrist and pulled her forward and hit a pressure point in her neck causing her to pass out.
Stand in the rain
02-20-2007, 02:27 AM
((I'm gonna go now.ttyl!))
Solarkitten
02-20-2007, 02:29 AM
kloud passes out and drops her swords (me to)
Stand in the rain
03-02-2007, 03:18 AM
Savea put the girls arm over her shoulder and tried to drag her to the military base.