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living_in_twilight
04-01-2007, 09:15 PM
:lightbulb Warning: I do not in any way support suicde.

((also: I am not depressed I'm just dark.....for some reason I feel bloody when I'm bored O_O
on with the poem
it's freeverse btw...>>))

THE BLADE
Silver, smooth
Inviting, cold
beckoning me to free myself for all problems
calling me to come and die
one smooth insision and all will be fine
a cradle the loving object
then kiss it, the cold metal agianst my lips
I then pull the razor edge aginst my wrist
the blood now flowing freely
my visoin cluods and tunnles
and I fall willingly into the forgiving darkness

helpme848
04-01-2007, 09:30 PM
Well that was deep...
I loved it...
You are a wonderful poet... - Bravo -

living_in_twilight
04-01-2007, 09:36 PM
((brava...I'm a girl XD))

thank you... I don't think it's all that though....

helpme848
04-01-2007, 09:55 PM
[[ Sorry... -__- I'm Not So Smart... ]]

living_in_twilight
04-01-2007, 09:59 PM
XD it's fine most people just say bravo anyway. I was just telling you ^-^

star*
04-01-2007, 10:17 PM
that was really good!

living_in_twilight
04-01-2007, 10:19 PM
thanks ^^'

I still wonder why people like it though..... I'm not really that good >>

star*
04-01-2007, 10:21 PM
thanks ^^'

I still wonder why people like it though..... I'm not really that good >>

i like it because its good...duh!:D

living_in_twilight
04-01-2007, 10:23 PM
XD yeaaaahhh >>

star*
04-01-2007, 10:41 PM
XD yeaaaahhh >>




:D ..ppl on here are crazy...(no wonder im here:rolleyes: )